Good job by dedicating time and energy on it. -Texture(color collection) awesome -Sound (enough details) perfect -camera angle good -Locationa sells/awesome/perfect -Makeups brilliant.
Technical issues.. -camera movement/panning haiko poa sana kwasababu mmesogeza kulia na kushoto mara nyingi kama music video.
-Too much time on one scene.(boring)
-Story is copy of the Mad Max*(too obviously)
-If it's Trailer, then it's too long.
-Sound effects is against actions, some of the parts (sound gives attention and nothing is happening)
-Vissual effects(chicken supposed to splash blood but wasn't that way.
Otherwise I really amazed with the work you did guys. I'm so impressed.
I love it.
As a future film maker i had to give out what i think. Don't take it personal.
Good job by dedicating time and energy on it.
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-Sound (enough details) perfect
-camera angle good
-Locationa sells/awesome/perfect
-Makeups brilliant.
Technical issues..
-camera movement/panning haiko poa sana kwasababu mmesogeza kulia na kushoto mara nyingi kama music video.
-Too much time on one scene.(boring)
-Story is copy of the Mad Max*(too obviously)
-If it's Trailer, then it's too long.
-Sound effects is against actions, some of the parts (sound gives attention and nothing is happening)
-Vissual effects(chicken supposed to splash blood but wasn't that way.
Otherwise I really amazed with the work you did guys.
I'm so impressed.
I love it.
As a future film maker i had to give out what i think.
Don't take it personal.
asante kaka
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